As time grows older, I stop to ponder
The path my life has treaded upon
To lessons learnt my mind does wander
And the people into my world, drawn
The path my life has treaded upon
To lessons learnt my mind does wander
And the people into my world, drawn
As life goes on, I stop to wonder
At the way it unfolds in front of me
Thru my storms, love stole the thunder
Now life’s not just about me, but WE!
At the way it unfolds in front of me
Thru my storms, love stole the thunder
Now life’s not just about me, but WE!
22 comments:
As times grows older, so do we and everything else resonates along :)
Nice post Dee :)
Aww.. that was such a sweet poem :)
Isn't that great, first that it is no longer 'Me' but 'We' and secondly, you've been able to stop and wonder :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Aww...Dee...its so pretty, adorable and lovely:):) Ah! lovely poetry...hmm...We huh?;) lucky u!
oh, lovely and meaningful poetry.:) It's all about WE..:) Hope you're fine dear :) Smile..:)
Lovely Poetry :) "We" its just 2 letters word but it has got a great strength in it. Well Written:)
Thats a damn sweet and a lovely poem! Cute :)
What a nice way to start the New Year from I to WE!Lovely words
ha! good one!
Could relate to it :)
from I to We, indeed
keep it goin;)
Lovely poem. You have summarized love and life in eight simple lines.
I would like to continue this one further too...but may be not now.. :D
I will leave it as is...because...WE is perfect :)
This was beautiful :)
Ahh! It would be the most wonderful moment to say 'about we'
:D
Awesome lines!! Very beautifully written ..
'As time grows older' I like this. Nice composition and lovely picture:)
love often steals thunder and much more...
...cheers to the togetherness!
I really loved this Dee! Especially the "We" instead of me :) I came by to see if you had returned and I'm happy to see this post here but I must have missed it along the way :(
Glad you're still bloggin' :D Hope all is well with you!
Thank you all so much for these lovely comments!!! Me been on a blogging break and will continue to do so for a little while more. I'll be back soon! :)
so simple and beautiful this poem!! Liked it :)
so nicely written...GOD<3U
Sweet and simple!
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